采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用。
This sentence is very thought."Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal in them."That because we are in a world fulls of difficulties.It is necessary for us to live a happy life by overcome difficulties and meet challenges,which means we must upgrade our ability. As we all know.It is not a simple thing to improve our ability,this is a long-term process. First and it is also the most important point,when we encounter problems,the best way to deal with them is to go straight at them.In this process,we can improve our ability to face problems and also fell prouder and confidant when we solve those problems.Second,we should learn to seek outside help.Sometimes,we might be puzzled,so there is no doubled that we need teacher to instruct us. Finally,we should improve our ability through small things.Because we known things are not small substantially,the most important is we can learn more from it and improve ourselves though those small things. In conclusion,to be happy is easy.Life always fulls problems and challenges,which is life,which is colorful and happy life.