用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;全文结构较为严谨。
Relationship between the nature and human The conflict between human and nature are hotly discussed in society. It’s an issue confusing our human for hundreds of years. Human belongs to the nature, get resources from nature, at the same time, discharge waste to the nature. No more, no less. It seems fair enough until people’s desire rises infinitely----treating ourselves as the god of nature, destroy plants, killing animals, and do whatever that benefit our human. The nature cannot speak, bearing people’s behaviors in silence all along. However, human has to pay back at the right time. For the recent years, human realized gradually that destroying the nature for own benefits finally pay back when our surroundings are filled with epidemics which threaten our lives, extinction of untold kinds of plant and animal species, little pure air and more and more natural disasters that we cannot resist. All of these disasters are caused by human activities towards nature. Towards this problem there come two different sounds. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem, for now the nature has already been destroyed by human severely to which no measures could be taken to salvage and all we have to do is to undertake the effects. These people are sort of pessimistic I think, although harm has already been exerted to nature in such an extent, there still should be some measures to improve the condition here and now. While some other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation, which I agreed a lot. After all, we human are still alive and surely can do something to it. From my own perspective, I think it’s eager to protect the nature right now. it’s something that need to be done first, much more important than developing economy. At least things below should we do first. Stop killing wildlife, establish specific institutions to protect and examine the habitat of animals and plants. Reduce digging the raw materials like fossil fuels, etc. I believe it’s never too late to protect the nature----our own home.