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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
文章高级词汇表达灵活，但拼写错误稍多；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
In every phrase of the history, the question refer to the development of human beings is the crutial issue that people often discuss. Some people believe that human beings has been achieving a great progress along with the time elapse, while others think many aspects of society still need to improve for the better living conditions. It is widely accepted that people have been made dramatic progress in order to achieve better living conditions, including in communication field and phamacy industry. Many years ago, if people wanted to communicate with their friends who stay far away from their home, they have to write a letter and waiting for a relative long time to receive the responsive letter. However, due to the rapid development of teconology, the interenet advent and many more efficent device are invented, such as mobile phone and computer, so that people then can acquire the message from their frinds or familiers immediately by using apps or email. Furthermore, people have been reserching a lot of new medicines to prevent the disease spread and save people's life. In recent decades, the professionals in phamacy industry all over the world have acquired surprising progress and impressive accomplishement. They have made the useful medicine to precaution heart disease and cancer. They organise the forum to discuss tough medical programe and find the way to resolve the problems. They share their intelligent, ability, even the research patent for the human beings. Admitted, although people have made significant progress in many domains in our society ,some people stil think that their needs hard to satisfied. For example, due to the rapid development of economy, human beings have already found that it is impossible to balance between economic growth and environment protecting. It is inevitable that some people are more likely to pursue the better surroundings. What is more, there are some religious conflict happend in a number of regions. Even the government among nations have to face these durable questions. In conclusion, it is undoubtly that people have made significant progress in recent decades. And people can prospect a better living conditions and bright future, which is the aim that everyone pursue.
