拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Keeping mental fitness under whatever circumstances is important.Nowadays,a great many of students are enduring a lot of pressures,from education or family.However, not all students are manage to tide them over.So keeping mental fitness under whatever circumstances is important for students.For one thing,it can help one foster friendly interpersonal relationship.Instead of treating classmates as opponents,students should cooperate with them and benefit from it.For second,it can help one see disappointment and frustration from fight perspective.Thinking that the failure is the mother of success,it can help them survive the temporary blows and look forward to the bright future. On no account can we ignore the importance of keeping psychological health.As a student,not only do we need to build a strong body,but also we should keep mental fitness in order to face the pressures or challenges of modern society.We should word harder to keep pace with our classmates rather than getting consumed by jealous all the time.We should keep optimism whatever happen to us.And it is high time that the school exerted every efforts to educate and guide the students to keep mental fitness.