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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇使用较丰富,但拼写检查要重视。

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With the development of global economy,many techology develops rapidly as well,especially the techology of computers.because in our daily life,computers act as a perfect assistant which everything can be completed instantly. Admittedly,computers lead us to a convenient life,but it also gives rise to many negative influence. Just as a saying goes,each coin has its two sides.Through the computers,human can pay attention to the sitution all over the world and acquire what they want such as studying experience,communication skills,difference of cultures and a variety of televisions and so on.What's more,the computers provide us human with more accurate ways to solve the problems or to finish the jobs,with less energy to be wasted. However,depending on computers totally also make a lazy man out of us.In other words,if we are addicted in playing computers,we will become a cyber addict.A new study found that a great number of people have became the unable while they left the computers.

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