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Tony,13 years old,Class 4,Grade 1,England,father, teacher,school,mother,
doctor,brother,driver,favorite,blue,vegetable但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨；文章用词太过单一，另外请作者加强单词拼写的检查。
I'm Tony My name is Tony. I'm 13 years old. I come from England. Now I study in a school. I'm in Class 4, Grade 1. I have a happy family. My father is a teacher. He teaches in a school. My mother is a doctor. She works in a hospital. And my brother is a driver. I love them very much. my favorite color is blue and I like vegetables best. Do you want to make friends with me? My name is Cos,I'm 24 years old.I come from England,Now I study in a school ,I'm in class 4,Grade 1,I have a happy farmily,My father is a teacher,He teaches in school. My mother is a doctor, She works in a hosptial, And my briother is driver, I love them very much .my favorite color is blue and I like vegetables best,Do you want to male friends wiht me?
