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dear friend you tell me you will visit my hometown ,i am very happy . i come from mianyang ,it is a beautiful city . there are many pandas in WOLONG, they are special and smart animals maybe you will make a mistake when you saw at the sight of them probably you will say they are ugly with a long time you will change your ideas i ensour you will fall in love with them And i will take you to BAOEN temple in pingwu too ,it is a log of pingwu, it also called THE PALACE MUSEUM . That's all i will give you more information when you go to my hometown