采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
How suprised I felt today! I know English is more and more popular in recent years. That is to say,nothing is more important than the fact English is nessary in daily life. This conclusion can be drawn from the following point. Firstly, English is used wildly all the world. Talking about their life in English, visitors come from different countries. Secondly,not only we can introduce our country to world, but also learn the advanced teachnolgy and contrubit ourselves to country. Thirdly, it is a fun thing that we think learning English. we konw about quiet a few culure from English. Believe it or not, English has been sent into our heart to draw up a new picture. So come and join English Weekly, we will all be there.