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In many parts of the world, there is a notable trend that more and more genetically modified food came into being and become part of our life.It will play increasingly more important role in our lives duo to use the transgenic technology which can solve the world food shortage problem to some extent. Furthermore, some citizen cheer for the great deed because genetically modified food has a distinct advantage, such as insert resistance, high yield and anti-herbicide.It would be very helpful for people. At the same time, this is an important because genetically modified food duo use pesticide a little so the environment pollution can also avoided. Although a great number of people become skeptical about them as well as are not willing to buying even eating them. They doubt whether the genetically modified food is safe enough to be consumed or not. So there has been a huge controversy in the safety of the genetically modified food. Thus, whether citizen use genetically modified food in the daily life or not is under hearted debate. This essay will argue that the advantages of genetically modified food outweigh the disadvantages because of three remarkable reasons: high production, price and safety.