2015年高考作文优秀范文：移民火星

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Furthermore, the genetically modified food brings huge benefits to mankind duo to this kind of food for the most part cheap and easier to plant. First of all, the genetically modified food allows more land to be farmed by fewer farmers. Farm work therefore becomes more efficient and less time consuming. As a combined result, food is becoming cheaper which benefits consumers across the world by and large. Also, because of genetically modified food have some advantages,such as high yield, anti-herbicide and insect resistance. It means it can produce more food at the same time. So it is easy to plant.