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2015年高考作文优秀范文:移民火星

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:32浏览次数:1952
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可适当增加从句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累。

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In conclusion, this essay has argued that it is quite reasonable to eat genetically modified food and that therefore it is vital that genetically modified technology can bring more advantages to human beings as a result of high production, price and safety. In brief,it has been shown that with the stunning world population of more than 8 billion today, genetically modified food can solve the food shortage .More and more people today are beginning to care about genetically modified food and eat them. It plays an important role in the modern family and meets the need of the society. Although this essay was unable to address the issue of some people afraid of eating them duo to affect human health. However, each new things have its own growing process, so the general public should use the objective inclusive vision and critical to treat them. Future research in this area would be interesting. With the development of technology and agriculture, the public have every reason to believe that genetically modified food has a bright future.

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