不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;文中拼写错误比较多,用词也稍显贫乏;使用了个别复杂句,但文中错误句子较多。
I have a good friend,he name is wang qin hu.now is seven years .i very like him ,because he have a black hair,big mothe.wo office go to school together. I have a good friend,he name is wang qin hu.now is seven years .i very like him ,because he have a black hair,big mothe.wo office go to school together.