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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com subject:To establish business relationships Dear sir or Mandom I know your new product of NO.0570 the exhibiton of in New York on the date of Dec.15th to 22nd.I was quite interested.please send us price list and instruction .Tank you attention for you , I excepted we ate establish business relationship Your sincerly Hu bin
