高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章。

many years ago,my hometown,where was arounded by a lot of trees,was only a small village.in my childrenhood,we always go to riverlet with many friends.at that time .the water was very clean and we can see fishes have fun.although the house we live in,which was shabby,even that the street was thiy.we must do many farm works everyday and live poor life.nowadays,our hometown has had a earth shaking change.there is countless tall bulidings and factoies.we can see the cars gallop on the streets instead of trees reduceing and fishes disappearing.industry development coursing the enviroment more and more terrible.so we have to take some effictive measure to dispose of pollutions.