小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl.She has black hair,two black eyes and a red month.Her voice is better,she is good at singing. She is a clover girl.She likes read and play computer game and chess. She is also nice.She often helps us.Our classmates like her very much.