小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher is science teacher.He's very strong.He has a big month,two big eyes and a not big nose.He often wears black new shirt and brow pants,with two big shoes. My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart,isn't he? Today.We have science class.We are very happy.Because he is very funny.Who is he?He's Mr Zhou.