语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;复杂句采用很棒;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,可是单词拼写做的不错。
Spring Festival is coming,and stands for a new year, at the same time,we will have a spring festival party.in these days,many people like to watch Tv on cctv about the spring festival party;but,have some people think of that the party should be to cancel. In my views,the spring festival should not to cancel.because of the party is center of modern time of people 's life and have traditional of China too.it is releated to people's life ,if the party was cancel,the traditional of cultural about China will slowly lost,at the same time, people don't know about current things,and lost interesting in the country of developing,so I feel that the party can't cancel.