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拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
As the contemporary society develop dramatically,an increasing number of people have a high living level,they can cost money to hair someone to clean house or doing else housework.Accordingly,it's not surprise to hear the phenomenon that some students who hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning.Although the students have a ability to hire somebody to do this daily housework,we should not let this situation going on. There are lots of reason to support my point.First of all,as a student,we not only do well in study but also we should learn how to deal with the things of our daily life.Meanwhile,it is significantly for us to cultivate a good habit,such as,we should do our own thing by ourselves.The last but not the least,we are student that our duty is how to learn better,more importantly,the money is not earned by ourselves. Consequently,personally,as a student,it is significant to know that good study is our duty.Hence,we should learn that we do our own thing by ourselves.Only in this way can we have a wonderful and colorful future in the ruthless society.
