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It is not wisely that drawing a concllusion at right when you see or hear anything. As we all know,judgging a person by its apparence is not wise,so do other things.However,more people could not understand its meaning well. I consider that seeing or hearing is not believing,but the survey is.For example,one day you see a little crying,a woman catch her and hit her back.What firstly come in your mind?Maybe the woman is crule.But tje truth is that the little girl eat something poisionl,the woman want to help her by hitting.
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