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文章层次较为清晰；部分高级词汇也能熟练使用，但文中有较多拼写错误；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误。
As we konwn, the emission of greenhouse gas,which leads to global warming ,and but also causes the sea level rising gradually. Therefore, it is emerency to take effective measures to contorl global warming for all countires. Heads of state gathered at the UN to dicuss their responsibility. For instance, the developed country promise to emit the greenhouse gas and offer some financial assistance. Moreover, the developing country is volunteer to fight with the developed country.China recommends green economy and strenghens the management of the enviormental pollution. In my views, I will try my best to decrease the waste of goods. For example, recycling the garbage、saving water、turning off computer、wearing old clother、using recycle bags and so on. Hoping the world becomes more and more green, we are both love our home.
