结构良好,但是语言不流畅;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,另外请重视拼写检查;句式偏短,建议加强复杂句的使用。
I have a black and white dog, it's name is DuDu, DuDu is my good friend. we are usually play together. DuDu is 9 years, it likes to eat bone. my family are like it. it is always runs in the gardon every morning. and sleeps at afternoon. it is a very nice dog.