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It is vividly depcted in the picture given above that a man who has a busy day and he has a day that with the computer working and playing.Recently,with the fact that the development of the Internet and the computers are used more and more widely,Our every day would be filled with the computers. A chain of reasons for the phenomenon.First of all,computers have been a important part in our modern life,which have been used to work,entertaiment and reduce the distance with our friends and families.We can use computers everywhere ,which made us conviniences to working and learning some new things.Bsides,in the face of mountain pression of competitive ,we had better try ourselves to improve our ability and do our best to make the work good.Therefore,we are not only work hard at workshop but also at home,even we are sleeping which is known as bad for our health. In conclusion,though computers have been important part of our modern life,we had better keep a keptcial eyes to using and spening time to go outdoor and don't always sitting in the front of the computers' screen to protect our eyesight and physical health.
