小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My Best Friend As we all know, "A friend in need is a friend indeed." And I am so lucky to have a friend like that ,who is always there when I am in trouble. We met in the kidgarden when we was young,and since then we didn't apart from each other ever since untill now. There are one thing that she made impressed me the most.It was a heavy rainy day,but I forgot to bring my rainy coat.And after school, I was so worried because my mom didn't catch me and it was still rainning heavily. I was about to run into the rain when she came over to me with her raincoat in her right hand,and said that"take mine,my home is nearer than yours."As soon as she said it over,she disappered in the rain before i could react on it. I was deeply touched by her. She is a good girl. And I will cherish our friendship foever.