小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Double eleven was first launched by Taobao,this day is shopping Promotion Day Camival,the influx of large-scale discount promotion activities,the day sales unpopular,turnover this year gradually increasing.Legend of the double eleven is online shopping goods”cheap”one day. Eleven ago,the major online shopping mall,the store has a warm red envelopes,coupons,such as the sale of the Businesses for gaining and wildly beating gongs and drums. Buyers shopping cart also put into a willingness to buy goods.Everyone excited tension. Double eleven day from zero start,”night owl”out,little mouse,payment brush,brush,be in full swing,Everybody happy sad. After double eleven,logistics express will be very busy.Everybody calm waiting.This day is also the birth of some new words”cut the hand””eat dirt”...