2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中用词稍显贫乏；文章组织结构良好；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化。

My views on Online Shopping By the developing of technology, internet are gradual our life. at the meantime, Online Shopping are also into our daily life, now ,no doubt that Onling Shopping was becoming a fashion. Obviously,Online Shopping have advantage over traditional Shopping, it is convenient and efficient compare the usually payment way,