2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping By the developing of technology, internet was gradual into our life. at the meantime, Online Shopping are also into our daily life, now ,no doubt that Onling Shopping was becoming a fashion. Obviously,Online Shopping have advantage over traditional Shopping, it is convenient and efficient compare the usually payment way,