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假设上星期六你参加了朋友的生日聚会，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，叙述一下有关情况。
要求写出：
1.聚会的时间'地点和参加人员。
2.生日礼物和聚会过程。
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Last Sunday was my friend's birthday party.A lot of classmates came to his birthday party.We had a birthday party for him. Everyone gave him a gift.He liked them very much.His mother bouqht a birthday cake for him,and we all sang "Happy birthday to you". At the party,Li ming sang an English song.Xiao Fang danced.Kang Kang performed Chinese Kungfu.Wang Lin played the piano,and I sang a song.We played,danced,sang,ate and drank. We all had a good time at his party!
