2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文章组织结构良好；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

My views on Online Shopping By the developing of science and technology, internet was gradual into our life. at the meantime, online shopping are also into our daily life, now ,no doubt that Onling Shopping was becoming a fashion. Obviously,Online Shopping have advantage over traditional Shopping, it is convenient and efficient compare the usually payment way. in our side ,we can see this condition,we want to buy a Beijing's gaodian,but we stay in the hangzhou, in the past, we have not to going to Beijing by ourselves or request our friends bring up,