2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

My views on Online Shopping By the developing of science and technology, internet was gradual into our life. at the meantime, online shopping are also into our daily life, now ,no doubt that Onling Shopping was becoming a fashion. Obviously,Online Shopping have advantage over traditional Shopping, it is convenient and efficient compare the usually payment way. in our side ,we can see this condition,we want to buy a Beijing's cake, but we stay in the hangzhou, in the past, we have not to going to Beijing by ourselves or request our friends bring up, today we can buy it on the Online, when we pay money by mean of internet, seller will sent out, we juet wait three or five days ,we can eat this food,