2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

My views on Online Shopping By the developing of science and technology, internet was gradual into our life. in the meantime, online shopping are also into our daily life, now ,no doubt that Onling Shopping was becoming a fashion. Obviously,Online Shopping have advantage over traditional Shopping, it is convenient and efficient compare the usually payment way. in our side ,we can see this condition,we want to buy a Beijing's cake, but we stay in the hangzhou, in the past, we have not to going to Beijing by ourselves or request our friends bring up, today we can buy it on the Online, when we pay money by mean of internet, seller will sent out, we just wait for three or five days ,we can eat this food, it's can't image in the old days. Of course ,Oline Shopping has a bad side, to saft way say,