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假设上星期六你参加了朋友的生日聚会，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，叙述一下有关情况。
要求写出：
1.聚会的时间'地点和参加人员。
2.生日礼物和聚会过程。
文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。
It was Ann's birthday last Sunday .She had her birthday party at home . It began at 4:00 in the afternoon . I came to her home by bike . I gave Ann a Chinese dictionary as a present , and said : “ Happy birthday to you .” When all her friends arrived , Ann's mother brought a big birthday cake . We sat around the table , sang songs and ate the delicious cake together . We had a good time .
