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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可增加从句和复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足。
With the developing of science and technology, the internet was gradual into our life. in the meantime, online shopping is also into our daily life, now ,no doubt that Onling Shopping was becoming a fashion. Obviously,online Shopping has advantage over traditional Shopping, it is convenient and efficient compare the usually payment way. but it's saft always people worried about an problem,because of payment way digitization, Internet fraud are also coming to our side. compare traditional shopping, Online shopping more right of difficult than the former. In my opinion, online Shopping is advantage over disadvantage, in our side ,we can see this condition,we want to buy a Beijing's cake, but we stay in the hangzhou, in the past, we have not to going to Beijing by ourselves or request our friends bring up, today we can buy it on the Online, when we pay money by mean of internet, seller will sent out, we just wait for three or five days ,we can eat this food, it's can't imagine in the old days. so I think it's tend of the development of the times, we need to do just adapt and complete it.
