高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；文章组织结构良好；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章。

In the past,there are many trees in my hometown,and many fish in the river ,the house is very easy,and the street not very long.people are work hard.And now ,there are too many high buildings and cars in the street,so it become crowded.therefore the environment become more and more terrible,then the trees and fish become less and less.the most pressing demand of the day is protect the environment.