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As the developments of the days,university students are increasing seriously in China.In the meanwhile,lots of graduates out of work now.In order to reduce employment pressure,the center government encourages graduates to be an village officials. There is no doubt that the solution to decrease the employment pressure is very effective.First of all,it is necessary to build the builtiful counties for university studdents with ability.What's more,they can benifit from the experience when they are village official.What's the most important is that they will learn lots of different knowledge and broaden the horizon from the experience. In a word,I firmly believe that our great government will solve the problem that graduates find it diffcult to look for a job well.