文章组织结构良好;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
As the developments of the days,university students are increasing seriously in China.In the meanwhile,lots of graduates are out of work now.In order to reduce employment pressure,the center government encourages graduates to be a village officials. There is no doubt that the solution to decrease the employment pressure is very effective.First of all,it is necessary to build the builtiful counties for university studdents with ability.What's more,they can benefit from the experience when they are village official.What's the most important is that they will learn lots of different knowledge and broaden the horizon from the experience. In a word,I firmly believe that our great government will solve the problem that graduates find it difficult to look for a job well.