高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

Dear editor: I am writing this letter to tell you something about the controversy about family cars. with the improvement of living conditions, more and more families have their own cars.many people consider cars as a fast,convenient,and comfortable means of transportion.You can go almost anywhere as you want. Besides,the increasing number of family cars reflects the rise of the standard of people's living and the country's prosperity.what is more,the car industry also enhance the development of other related businesses. On the other hand,many people think that the increase of family cars will cause more waste gas ,and therefore polluting the environment.Too many cars will also lead to traffic congestion and accidents,and the problem of parking cars is also becoming more and more serious. what do you think of these opinions. Yours sincerely Lilei