文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章组织结构良好;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇。
As the developments of the days,university students are increasing seriously in China.In the meanwhile,lots of graduates are out of work now.In order to reduce employment pressure,the center government encourages graduates to be village officials. There is no doubt that the solution to decrease the employment pressure is very effective.First of all,it is necessary to build the beautiful counties for university studdents with ability.What's more,they can benefit from the experience when they are village official.What's the most important is that they will learn lots of different knowledge and broaden the horizon from the experience. In a word,I firmly believe that our great government will solve the problem that graduates find it difficult to look for a job well.