文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;简单句偏多了;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
I have a good friend . She is a beautiful girl .She has black long hair ,two black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better than others .She is good at singing. She is a clever girl . She likes reading books ,playing computer games and chess .She is also nice .She often helps us .Our classmates like her very much .