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According to recent report human activities are changing our life.they can keep the forest don't be destoried by natural climate, when the ultra weather come human will do previous measure protect them ,human can't live alone without natural.the same with natural. But we can't avoid with human's activities cause huge damage. because we just get from natrual but not return, so break the balance of human and natural.how to slove the relationship of human and natural. First we must improve our consciousness of protecting the environment. Next make full use of existing science and techology to change nature. Finally we should reduce factory pollution,improve industrial technology,accumulate experience about the development of new energy. In the end i hope our environment to be better,all the world can focus on how to handle the worldwide problem
