2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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i'm glad to hear that you will go to my hometown and the intereating place in my heart is the xuanwu lakes. the reason why i'm eager to introduce this to you is there has a magnificent scenery.the xuanwu lakes is the most bigger lakes in my hometown as well as has large funny things.for example,you can close to see the lakes in the boat ,the more important thing is you can control the boat go where you want to go. and there is a good place when you feel tired,also you can spend a beautiful time with your firends or family. believe you will have a fun time if you going my hometown.