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In modern society, all around the companies, Interview has became a tool which to Choice people of capable and technology. in the job search process, the interview not only show in your Personal qualities, but also show you ability within work. There are some succeed factories of job interview. The first, before job interview, we should make some preparations about company. second, preparad a brife resume.it is a good time to show youselfe,