题目要求:
Higher education can be funded in several ways including the following three:
1. All costs are paid by the government.
2. All costs are paid by the student.
3. All costs are paid by the student using loans from the government that must be repaid after graduation. Discuss the benefits of each option. Which is the best one?
题目讲解:
语料库:
1. the higher education = college education 高等教育
2. the students’ loans = educational loans 学生贷款
3. work one’s way through college 半工半读
4. apply for the scholarship 申请奖学金
5. potential risk of refusing to repaying the loans 拒绝还款的风险
6. impose much pressure upon a nation economically 增加了政府的经济压力
7. come from the remote rural areas
8. subsidize = sponsor = finance 资助
9. economic support 经济支持
10. finish college education 完成高等教育
11. resolve more pressing social issues 解决更加紧迫的民生问题
12. stimulate one’s study motivation under the pressure of …… 在压力下激发学习动力
13. cherish the learning opportunities 珍惜学习的机会
14. face the risk of dropping out of school 面对辍学的风险
15. embark on part-timers 做兼职工作
文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without an education, many of us believe, is an unfortunate victims of the adverse circumstances and deprived one of the greatest twentieth century opportunities. Convinced the importance of education, modern states invested in a large institutes of learning to get back interests in the forms of enlightened young men and women who are potential leaders. So the tuition of college education issues are followed. To resolve this problem there are several ways to handle it. One method is that the cost can be paid by the government, in this aspect that everybody will be equally equipped with life. Furthermore, students will not confronted with his family inability to buy an education for them.Secondly, the fees will be undertaken by students themselves. Maybe only in this way, students will be stimulate to learning hard. And people also suggest that all costs can be paid by student using loans from the government. and the loans must be returned after his graduation. If students can applied loans from the government- so at least it seems to me, that is the best methods to address this issues. The government can better invest its money in other areas, not only education, but also the development of technology, the building of roads and railways, and the out-space exploration. For me,whatever meaning to pay the tuition, all are according to the condition of students. Students can pay by himself if his family can afford. the government can pay all if the country are wealth enough. but the best method is provide to students, who are insufficient to pay, the loans from government, which need to pay back after they got their diploma.