2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

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Advertising which can be seen everywhere in our daily life. No one can be escaped from the influence of advertising . Wheile some people think it is important while others think it has mumbers of effects. In my eyes , the negatives sides outweigh the advatages. The reasons can be clarified as the following ones. Firstly , advertisements usually