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Most of Chinese know that SiChuan are famous for beauty girls and dilisious food and espeisialy beautiful sights.It is very proud to me to as a girl come from SiChuan. My hometown is Chengdu.If my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown,I belive that he will surprizied for there landscap.Chengdu is a casual city on the westsouth China.There are many visitable intertstplac for example KuanZhaiXiangzi.