2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A Beautiful City in China China is a bigger country than other countries in the worly, in the meantime she is a one of the most beautiful country in the whole global, so in my seen, more and more cities are pretty in China. In the so many beautiful cities, my favourite city is Hangzhou, not only it's my hometown, but also it's