语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒。
A Beautiful City in China China is a bigger country than other countries in the world, in the meantime she is a one of the most beautiful countries in the whole world so in my seen, more and more cities are pretty in China. In the so many beautiful cities, my favourite city is Hangzhou, not only it's my hometown, but also it's