高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

从句使用不熟练；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

My hometown As the time went by,something different has taken place in my hometown. In the past,my hometown lay in the bow of trees.And the fish totally enjoyed theirselves in the beautiful river.what's more, at that moment,the houses is simple , the roads is small and the people lived in a simple life. But,nowadays,things changed.tall buildings and factories are nomal to see everywhere.the roads are crowded with cars.At the same time,environment pullution became a huge problem in our daily life.trees became less and less.the fish is dying away.we must take some actions to save the environment immediately.