2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇量偏少，也有些单词拼写错误；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可增加文中从句的使用量。

China is a bigger country than other countries in the world, in the meantime she is a one of the most beautiful countries in the whole world so in my seen, more and more cities are pretty in China. In the so many beautiful cities, my favourite city is Hangzhou, not only it's my hometown, but also graceful and restrained. there's a saying that"Up above there is heaven, down below there are Suzhou and Hangzhou"