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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句数量偏少；文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了。
China is a bigger country than other countries in the world, in the meantime she is a one of the most beautiful countries in the whole world so in my seen, more and more cities are pretty in China. In the so many beautiful cities, my favourite city is Hangzhou, not only it's my hometown, but also graceful and restrained. there's a saying that"Up above there heaven, down below there are Suzhou and Hangzhou"
