2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加几条从句。

China is a bigger country than other countries in the world, in the meantime she is a one of the most beautiful countries in the whole world so in my seen, more and more cities are pretty in China. In the so many beautiful cities, my favourite city is Hangzhou, not only it's my hometown, but also graceful and restrained. there's a saying that"Up above there heaven, down below there are Suzhou and Hangzhou". According to this, we can see some landscape of Hangzhou. If you want to China, I think I'm willing to bring you to enjoy the scenery,